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Recommended
4.7 hrs last two weeks / 4.7 hrs on record
Posted: 17 Mar @ 11:29pm
Updated: 18 Mar @ 1:28am

hot sexy trauma demon save me

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on a more serious note, this was a lovely experience and I appreciate the depth of the story. There are a few typos and misattributed dialogue lines here and there, but I'm certain those will be worked out with time. The story is enticing on both a direct look and a more thematic narrative viewpoint. In a way I am guilty myself of hiding from trauma with the sweet, saccharine feeling of passion. I liked what the game has to say about it.

The illustrations are beautiful and the story choices are relatively straightforward. I enjoyed both endings and was pleasantly surprised by both in different ways. I am not sure I could fully understand what Dinah themself is supposed to be in a literal sense (though I think this is the intended effect), but from a narrative perspective it's quite clear. Kudos.
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Developer response:
Kira rapira  [developer] Posted: 18 Mar @ 6:50am
Thank you so much for such a detailed review! I apologize for any typos in the text, we plan to gradually fix everything we'll find in both localizations via hotfixes.

I’m really glad the game left a positive impression despite this. This story and characters are very important to me, so it means a lot to hear your thoughts. 'Hot, sexy trauma demon' is the most iconic description of Dinah I’ve ever seen.

Also, thank you for making the guide and pointing out that specific line!
1 Comments
itsmeowdev 18 Mar @ 1:24am 
A specific area that confused me, for the devs: When looking at the photo of Alice and her father, Alice says that on that day he "died for me", which implies that he died ON HER BEHALF, rather than what I think was intended which is that he "died to me", she no longer cared about her father in any meaningful capacity on this day.