This VN has a really cool/unique art style and the story seems interesting so far. The biggest thing worth mentioning however is the writing itself. What is being portrayed is fine but it reads like someone who isn't a native English speaker. It's a little hard to digest at times. It really needs someone to go over it and fix things to make it flow better. Things like adding "'s" to the end of names, pluralising some words. fixing on/in being mixed up, little words being added in. Just small things but w...