@ Cowbro

I'm off here, find me in LOL.

@ Cowbro

I'm here on time, I saw u were here 25 mins ago.

Msg me when u come back in coz I will wait for ya, max. 30 mins or I have to go to sleep :P

Cheers,

DK

@ Cow

HAPPY NEW YEAR MY COWBRO ~!~

HOPE U GOT AN AWESOME NEW YEAR ~!~


BEST WISHES,

DK

@ Cow

Bro, dun worry, I gotcha. I'll start Steam to c if u r here before go to LOL.


Cheers,

DK

@ Cow

I enjoyed your new short film, here are some comments for ya in a professional perspective.


Pros:

Interesting short film, little bit chilling in the end.
Lighting was good.
Acting was not bad.


Cons:

Camera usage and angles should be adjusted to fit a better imagine and position of the actor and actress, in order to make the whole film feel tight and attractive.

Story needs to be strenghen, quite blank in the first few mins.

Many tiny things could be enhanced during editing.


Verdict: If it's your virgin film, I'll give it 75%.

Final thought: I could write some 10-min scripts exclusively for ya later on if you have a similar project like this. Keep it going, you have a nice touch there!


Best Regards,

DK

@ Cow

Yo bro, I was on Steam last nite but didin't c ya on...
Kinda sry coz pretty busy these days, fdz r cele bday w/ me each day!
Gonna be here again tmr @ noon & nite I guess, hope cya around!

G'luck,

DK